Tuesday, September 4, 2018

My Honorable Mention: The League of Utah Writers 2018 Writing Contest


Collect and celebrate the small victories. We reach our goals one hill at a time.

I'm happy to report that I received an honorable mention in 2018's Writing Contest for the category of *Prose: First Chapter (Novel).* This contest is judged by professional authors from outside Utah, so that's something.

If you don't follow my FB author page, Daniel Rodrigues-Martin, I'd love your support. I'm also on Twitter, but only because I have to.

The honorably-mentioned chapter, "The Fates of Stars and People," comes from the beginning of my third book in the Ark Saga, Goddess from the Machine, and is included below.

THE FATES OF STARS AND PEOPLE
(c) 2014-18 by Daniel Rodrigues-Martin. All rights reserved.

It was poetry to die like this, rain falling in sheets from the mouth of an angry sky, all the cosmos peering through the cloud cover at the man’s last moments. Did the stars ponder the fates of humanity as humanity pondered the fates of stars? Or was it simply that the man did not wish to be forgotten?

For as long as he recalled, his hope had been for the advent of a true “new humanity.” For humanity to endure, it must evolve. To evolve, it must die and be reborn as something different. Death was the oldest instinct of living things, yet no one ever went quietly.

The man’s mistake was mathematics. Cost-benefit analysis. A miscalculation ready to be paid in blood. The girl about to kill him had transcended into something more than human, and for this he was grateful. Her foreign accent now bore a metallic resonance that frightened and enthralled him. She was sharper and stronger and fiercer than he could have hoped—a masterpiece. For that he could die.

The people of this city called her their “Goddess from the Machine,” for she was no mere angel. He saw it in her machine eye and understood that he was a fool to have ever sought to own her. He would die like a mutt, right here on the ground. He felt it, believed it, understood it.

But no one ever went quietly.

“So this is what you’ve chosen?” the man shouted through the rain as fog and smoke encroached. His fractured tibia jutted from his skin as he lay, drenched, in the cobbled streets of the city he’d helped build. She’d chased him here like a hare into a trap. He should have known.

“Evolution chose,” the girl said, one eye flashing neon blue as a stream of tiny, silvery machines circled her like hungry wolves. She was enrobed in black cloth that draped from her in shadowy tendrils.

“But you’ve finally embraced it,” the man said, shivering from the cold. “You’ve made the choice to accept the truth. It’s the only real choice we have.”

“All my life I thought I had no choice,” she said, “until the Vigilant brought me to this city and told me my life was my own. I believed him for a while, but you were right. It’s not about our choices. Never has been.” The girl gestured at the burning buildings that stained the gray streets orange and touched the fog with acridity. The silvery, cascading machines moved as extensions of the girl, just as she’d envisioned they would. “You were destined to be born rich,” she said. “I was destined to be a slave, to be abandoned, to watch the only people I loved die in front of me and to learn for certain that I’ve never been in control. You and I were always meant to be here, now, in this labyrinth of smoke, each of us broken, each of us alone.”

“Humanity won’t survive another Tumult,” the man said, knowing she was right. “The World is on your shoulders, now. You know what has to happen if we are to endure.”

“I don’t know much any longer,” she answered, gazing through the clouds and the stars beyond that her cybernetic eye perceived. “I know I’m not afraid to lose myself, that freedom is a lie, and the fates of stars and the fates of humans are one in the same. We read them, seekin’ answers, but we and they are swallowed by the same void. So I won’t be pushed and pulled any longer. I’ve found liberation in my chains. They’re mine by right and by choice.”

Rain descended and fires burned and smog engulfed the streets.

“They’re callin’ me their ‘goddess,’ ” she said without looking at him, the tiny, silvery machines pulsing around her in a rippling halo of steel. “What do you think?”

She looked utterly divine, something to be worshiped by an ancient people now forgotten, a harbinger of a dawning age. She was magnificent. “You are everything I’ve hoped for. You are the future. You are the true new humanity, my vision come to life.”

“I want so much to kill you,” she said, sounding more flesh than metal. She was neither; she was both.

“You of all would know if it is right. The World and all its people are yours to deliver or destroy, to be remade in the image of the new. We won’t survive without you.”

“I know,” she said, her brightened eye dimming into shadow, into black.

The man exhaled as cold rain fell and the tiny machines cleaved to the girl and more smog encircled them. Nothing would ever be the same.

The World would not go quietly.

Saturday, July 14, 2018

Some Challenges of Fictional Languages in Worldbuilding

Languages in the Ark Saga are not any Earth Prime language. My philosophy of writing the characters’ idiom – how they speak and write as natives – was rooted in the principle that my narrative style is a direct translation of their fictional language (vocabulary, syntax, and grammar) into idiomatic American English.

Years into writing the books, I formalized unique alphabets for two of the languages represented in the fictional world of the Ark Saga. For the language the main characters speak, I realized that, given my philosophy of language within the story, any time a unique letter was named, there was not a complete correspondence between the English alphabet and the fictional alphabet. What this meant was that any time a character wanted to talk about the language they speak, they didn’t call it “English.” When any character had to directly name a letter or directly spell a word, they had to name the letter(s) in their language, not English. When an acronym was used, there wasn’t direct correspondence between the English alphabet and the fictional alphabet.

The biggest problem this raised was that because the characters were not speaking English, the words they used were themselves different. “Cat” was not pronounced “cat” and may even have had a different semantic range than it did in English. Thus, another layer of trouble arose: if the words themselves were different, then any acronym used was necessarily different. How a person’s name was spelled was different than how we might represent it in English.

How did I overcome this problem?

I altered my philosophy of language. Sometimes it's good to sleep in the bed you've made; it'll stretch your writing and creativity. In this case, the problems outweighed sticking to my guns. I decided that the language (excluding the alphabet) the main characters speak essentially corresponds to English. It created too many problems for consistency. I couldn’t play by the rules I’d written, and sometimes you've got to call it as it is.

However, for the other primary fictional language in the story, no alterations were made because to the main characters, it is a foreign language. Problems of regular usage (as in with the spelling of words or the use of acronyms) don’t apply.

Sunday, June 17, 2018

How to Get Published: Two Takeaways from the League of Utah Writers Summer Symposium (2018)

On June 16, 2018, the League of Utah Writers (LUW) held its Summer Writers Symposium at the University of Utah. The symposium covered a broad spectrum of topics from the value of poetry to the agenting vs. independent publishing debate. I had two main takeaways from the event.

#1 Success at Self-Publishing Means Sustained Hard Work (…And Probably Isn’t for Me)


Indie romance author Cami Checketts led a session titled: “Self-Publishing: Is It Right for You?” She provided some practical advice about different marketing sites (Bookbub) and the importance of sharing success and building a friendly community of co-writers and “cheerleaders.” Before taking the self-publishing path, Ms. Checketts had a literary agent and was traditionally published, but found consistent success challenging and traditional pathways restrictive. She was also not a fan of the publisher’s sizable cut.

The main takeaway of Checketts’s talk for me was that self-publishing is an all-in path to success. Ms. Checketts stated that she works of 6-10 hours per day at writing (I’m uncertain if this includes marketing and research) and as of June 2018 has self-published fifty-two books to Amazon. She does not watch TV, has a backlog of books, and on average publishes one book per month. She continues to write and publish regardless of launch-day successes or failures, and my understanding is she makes great money doing this.

To help themselves succeed at self-publishing, authors should:
  1. Publish regularly and consistently (consider writing a backlog of content before you start to give yourself a “cushion” of material to publish and time to write new content).
  2. Go with a digital self-publishing service like Amazon or Wilde and learn how to leverage the digital publishing service to feature your work.
  3. Invest in advertising your work via Bookbub, Google Adwords, or another pay-per-play self-marketing service.
  4. Network with other self-publishers writing in or near your genre.
  5. Build a mailing list and regularly update your readers to maintain hunger for your work.

Possible Pitfalls


There are also some pitfalls to reckon with if you are considering self-publishing.


  1. Write in a genre that sells. Ms. Checketts writes romance, which is the top-selling book genre. There is a hunger for the types of books she writers that horror and sci-fi writers do not enjoy. There is a higher payoff for the time and effort she puts into her books because it is a relatively easy market to sell in.
  2. Don’t bore yourself into writer’s block. Writer's block is what happens when you don't know what you're doing or you don't know why you're doing it - boredom is one of many possible root causes. Romance books are predictable, which, for those who like to read them, is part of the appeal. I would never want to churn out a book a month, and for the way I write it’s not possible. If you love your genre and don’t mind substituting different plot and character “variables” into the “writing equation” you could eventually reach a high output volume that will help you rise in the digital publishing ranks, but you have to write as much or as little as will allow you to be consistently productive.
  3. Selling cheap. If you sell cheap or have giveaways, you can build volume. If you have a huge log of products, a person who likes your cheap or free book might go on to buy ten, twenty, or in Ms. Checketts’s case, fifty-two books.
  4. Recognize that you’re running a business. This is true whether you are a self-publisher or are published in other ways, but it is especially true for self-publishers. You cannot rely on an agent, editor, or publisher to push you. It’s like running any small business. The buck stops with you, and if you can’t roll with that, you may be better served with other paths to publishing.

As a self-implied “Idaho farm girl,” Ms. Checketts clearly knows the value of a hard day’s work and has managed to leverage self-publishing to her benefit. Other writers looking to follow a similar path will need to customize their success strategy for their genre, desired workload, and other factors.

Writers looking to maximize their earnings and who are willing to be self-learners and self-starters may find success via this avenue of publishing.

What does this revelation mean for my own self-published stories? I’m not sure yet. But I love Quantum Fall. It just might reach completion in another format.

#2 Never Quit Being Yourself (OR: “Always write the truth.”)


A panel of agented authors led by Johnny Worthen, E.B. Wheeler, and Eric Bishop addressed every modern writer’s dilemma in a panel titled “To Agent or Not to Agent?” That is the question indeed.

The writers shared some gems that together led me to a single conclusion: never quit being yourself as a writer. Here’s what I mean:


  1. What is currently selling is always changing. As a veteran agent told me at the Chicago Writing Workshop back in 2016, what does well moves in cycles. For a while, Young Adult books were all about sexy vampires, then every protagonist was a Katniss Everdeen knockoff, and I don’t read YA so don’t ask me what the hot ticket is these days. The thing is, you can write a great book that an agent who knows your audience and genre will not sell during a given year or few years because the market is saturated. In that case, you may need to lay down a great book until it has better prospects. This has everything to do with business and nothing to do with your literary chops.
  2. Commercial success and artistic contentment are not one in the same. Or, as I said in an author interview some years ago, “Recognize the difference between being a successful writer and a financially successful writer.” This is largely dependent upon what you measure to be literary success. But the only way to determine that is to be true to yourself as a writer. For Ms. Checketts (above), I reckon she’s living her version of literary success. Her utopia is my dystopia (minus the nice $$ flow). And so I strive for my version of literary success and continue to refine what I mean by that while remaining content with my art.
  3. It’s never been easier to be published and it’s never been harder to get read. Which is why you must be content with yourself more than anything, because if it’s not that what you’re selling (writing) isn’t being bought right now (read), it’s that there’s so much available that standing out is a near impossibility. Being consistently good is fundamental to standing out. But standing out is also fundamental to standing out. Those who get agents and who find success go about this in different ways. They win contests and gain recognition in national review publications. They build networks of fellow writers and loyal readers to buy their stuff and talk about what they’re doing. They leverage social media. They market themselves and put their money where their mouth is. They research the literary market. They go to conferences and speak and learn. They never stop becoming experts at what they do.

Good agents want to believe in their clients. And they won’t believe in you unless you believe in yourself. You can’t sell your work – or yourself – if you think too highly or too lowly of yourself. Agents want to find the next bestseller, and the next bestseller is the writer who, most basically, does not quit being themselves.

So I guess hard work is the thing no matter how you go about this, and nobody is promised success, the world doesn’t owe us any favors, and other northeasterly aphorisms my father spouts.


I’m happy with my work and always have been.

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Tuesday, December 26, 2017

Mistborn Trilogy Review: 3/5 or 6.5/10

The Skinny: At the end of the day, there are better fantasy stories out there than Mistborn—probably from Sanderson himself.

Full Review: The Mistborn Trilogy, by Brandon Sanderson




In 2009 I broke ground on my first major sci-fi series. Somewhere around two-and-a-half books into writing, I attended my first writers’ conference in downtown Chicago, at an old hotel on Michigan Avenue. Though I write fiction fairly profusely considering I’m not being paid a living wage to do it, I prefer memoirs, biographies, and journalism over most fiction. Authors who write in these genres tend to have a stronger grasp of the nuts and bolts of good writing and compelling narrative, while a lot of speculative fiction authors are great with broad concepts and intriguing ideas and worldbuilding at the expense of compelling prose. Though the latter fascinates me when done well, the former is necessary for me to truly enjoy a story.

In seeking advice from readers around this time, acclaimed author Brandon Sanderson’s name came up frequently. I picked up Sanderson’s Mistborn Trilogy (2006-2008) around the last the quarter of 2014 to see what a major author writing close to my genre was doing.

Avid readers often describe “devouring” books and book series much like Netflix enthusiasts “binge” addictive serials. I devoured Patrick Rothfuss’s masterful two first entries of the Kingkiller Chronicle (2007, 2011; The Slow Regard of Silent Things; the world awaits book three). Rothfuss’s journey to New York Times stardom is a writer’s Cinderella story, so as much as I love his books, he wasn’t the best gauge for what standards lead to success.



My experience with the Mistborn series was, by comparison, a slow weathering of a great stone. Or, if you want to keep the eating metaphor going: I nibbled away at it like I kid who doesn’t want to finish his broccoli. I completed the Mistborn series in September 2017 – approximately three years after I began reading. This bears some explanation.

Where Mistborn Succeeds: Worldbuilding


Mistborn’s greatest asset is its worldbuilding. Visions of ashen, gothic spires contrasting against the perpetual red of a dying sun paint clearly the picture of a world without flowers. Apparent love and effort were invested by Sanderson into developing the philosophical concepts underlying the world, portrayed in many of the dead religions chronicled by the Keeper, Sazed. The Mistborn world is believable sociologically, mythologically, and historically, which is crucial for constructing robust fantasy. The major events and people groups of Mistborn are believable because of their complexity. This is to Sanderson’s credit as a conceptualizer of high fantasy and mythopoeia, and, unfortunately, constitutes most of the good I have to write about the series.



Where Mistborn Falters: Bad Use of Voice


Major portions of the Mistborn books are unfortunate drudgery. The dialogue is often repetitious in the immediate context (i.e., it states directly what is already implied by action and dialogue) and, while colloquial, the idiomatic speech of the Mistborn world seems inconsistent both with the parlance of brigands and thieves as well as with that of scholars, kings, and noblemen. The language reads too much like contemporary American English. While clarity should always be a writer’s top goal, it need not come at the cost of narrative or characters’ voices which, to my eyes, often seemed the case.

Most of the characters’ voices bleed together due to similar vocabulary, syntax, and reliance upon the American idiom mentioned above. A few characters have distinguishing verbal characteristics, but these are often laborious catch phrases or buzz words like “good man” and “child” out of the mouths of Breeze and Tindwyl, respectively. I recall counting the use of the former phrase on one page of my Kindle edition of book three and found that in that particular passage, every line of dialogue by Breeze contained the phrase “good man.” A character should not be most clearly defined by the sum total of his catchphrases.

The only character I truly enjoyed in this series was Sazed the Terrisman. Sazed has the clearest character voice, his actions and inactions carry narrative weight, and his personal struggles with religion force much of his inner turmoil to contend with the world Brandon Sanderson created. No other character’s development makes better use of Mistborn’s mythopoeia than Sazed—the protagonists included.

Labor Pains and Fight Sequences




I recall from The Two Towers Tolkien’s description of Aragorn’s blade falling upon Uruk-Hai like bolts of lightning. Sanderson provides little such artistry in his fight scenes, which often focus on intricately-described choreography.

When it comes to writing fights, authors should follow Tolkien’s lead and not lose the forest for the trees. Painting with broad strokes and leaving sharp description to key moments in Mistborn’s battles would have kept those portions of prose moving more smoothly and would have helped the crucial portions of those sequences stand out.

Bland Characters




With the exceptions of Sazed and Spook (due to his subplot in book three,) the cast of side characters is sadly forgettable. Breeze is far more interesting as a thief than as an emperor’s aide, as the events of books two and three turn him into little more than an oenophile who provides occasional comedy relief. Ham’s philosophical queries are close to nonexistent by book three, and he is essentially relegated to a second-tier set piece by that point; most of his words and actions in book three could have been performed by any character. Clubs was never especially relevant or interesting, and the other secondary characters who come and go across the trilogy failed to provide meaningful impact upon the story or on me as a reader.

(Don't) Trust Your Reader


Trust your reader. Not everything needs to be explained. If you really know something, and breathe life into it, they'll know it too. -Esther Freud
Sanderson often seems to be untrustworthy of his readers’ ability to make basic logical connections, egregiously restating established worldbuilding concepts even up into book three. One example in book three’s closing pages compares the character Marsh’s abilities to those of the Lord Ruler. Not only is this fact implied because of Marsh’s abilities themselves, but the same comparison is made earlier in the same book from the perspective of another character.

Sanderson’s reasoning for this is likely well-intended: his worldbuilding concepts are big and well-developed. There’s much to learn about the world itself, allomancy, feruchemy, and hemalurgy, and a lot of people could conceivably forget much of this information on the regular. Well-intended or not, the readers of the Mistborn trilogy are often reminded of remedial worldbuilding concepts. This unnecessarily lengthens the books, makes those particular portions of narrative boring to read, and whispers to me that the narrator doesn’t trust me to remember what I read earlier.

Mistborn's Greatest Technical Weakness: Abuse of Filtering Language


The biggest offense of the books is the abuse of filtering language – the words “could” and should” usually in connection with the subjunctive mood, expressing potentiality or ability over and above reality. This is despite most of the occurrences of filtering language referring to simple active states of being.

This is a narrative problem for two reasons. First, it unnecessarily lengthens the story overall. In Sanderson’s case, I’d reckon the Mistborn Trilogy would be thousands of words shorter without the abuse of filtering words. Second, the overuse of filtering language in contexts that are actually describing the simple past or present-active implicitly removes the reader from direct interaction with the events occurring. What often reads in the narrative as “Character X could hear the sound of Y,” could have been written as “Character X heard Y.” (This leads to a lesser issue of formulaic, repetitive, predictable prose if an author is not careful, but this is surmountable with creativity.) The abuse of filtering language caused much of the nuts and bolts of Mistborn’s storytelling to be repetitive and uninteresting to read. I gravitate toward journalism and biography precisely for this reason: authors writing in these formats have to exercise great skill in turning potentially monotonous details into literary hook after literary hook – and don’t forget the hard deadlines and word count limits. In my estimation, filtering language and unengaging prose are Mistborn’s greatest technical weakness.

An Unsatisfying Conclusion


The conclusion of the third Mistborn book left much wanting, not merely in terms of unanswered conceptual questions (more metals, events about the history that were barely addressed,) but in terms of untied character knots. The three-book metanarrative ends abruptly and unsatisfyingly. With little deep connection to the characters, it's hard to care when some die, others don't, and a newer, better world waits on the horizon for the survivors.

A Prolific Author, A Mediocre Trilogy




Along with Elantris and Wheel of Time, the Mistborn Series helped cement Brandon Sanderson as a modern giant of contemporary English speculative fiction. Sanderson’s enduring success can only mean that his style has matured since 2008. My gut tells me Mistborn is not the best measure of his skills.

At the end of the day, there are better fantasy stories out there than Mistborn—probably from Sanderson himself. 3/5 for its intriguing musings on religion and detailed worldbuilding. With more compelling characters and better prose, Mistborn could have been a powerhouse series that capitalized on Brandon Sanderson’s dense, imaginative mythopoeia. It’s not a story I plan on returning to.

Mistborn’s enduring legacy may not, in the final analysis, be the story itself, but its role in launching Brandon Sanderson’s literary career.

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Wednesday, September 7, 2016

Ark Book 2.5: Goddess from the Machine

After gaining some killer advice at the Chicago Writing Workshop 2016, I cut up the first Ark novel, An Autumn Veil, into the first two Ark novels: A Flood of Silence (previously: A Steel Horizon) and An Autumn Veil.

Book 3, A Labyrinth of Smoke, is still in the works, and book 2 has been undergoing restructuring now that it's standing on its own two feet. I've also been working on book 2.5: Goddess from the Machine.

Though properly a spin-off of the larger Ark saga, GftM features a plot and characters with touch points to AFoS and AAV, especially its protagonist and one other major character. It provides a fleshed-out background story for ALoS. Beta readers have already expressed appreciation of the characters and plot.

GftM is different than anything I've written. Originally a character study of an important, tangential character from AAV, the histories of the characters of the original short quickly overtook the narrative, ultimately demanding a more mature treatment. One of the funnest parts has been the dramatically different setting - different from anything else in Ark or from anything else I've written: the steampunk-inspired, libertine dystopian Machine City. Most of Ark thus far has taken place in untamed wilderness and lofty places of government. Writing a story that never leaves the big city has been a welcome change.

As GftM unfolds, the protagonist struggles to build a life of her own without the protection and steady guidance of her oldest friend, a mysterious vagabond-turned-vigilante called "Kid." The plot chronicles the protagonist's shift from grudging subservient to the Machine City's ills as she herself turns to a form of vigilantism to bolster the hope of the city's downtrodden proletariat. Her ultimate fate has a profound impact on the main characters from the first three major novels.

This story is darker than the main Ark novels. The plot deals with human trafficking and slavery, sexual assault, and taking vengeance into our own hands. It is told through a series of flashbacks interspersed with the present in which lessons the protagonist learned from Kid come to bear on her circumstances.

Upon completion, I estimate GftM will reach 90-95k words in length. The present acts and chapters are:

Part I: Some Measure of Peace
1. Like Yesterday
2. All I'll Ever Ask
3. 212793
4. The Copperpot
5. She Wept
6. A Measure of Peace
Part II: Constellations
7. Marjolaine Street
8. For Your Trouble
9. A Wholly Different Place
10. She Slept Alone
11. For Your Eyes Only
12. I'll Wake Up
13. The Vigilant
14. To Live Free
15. Lies In The Stars
Part III: A Star-Strewn Girl
16. 'Til I Get Back
17. A Promising Student
18. Old Marxus
19. Decisions, Decisions
20. Beat-Up Things
21. Requisitions
22. Scarborough Cavern
23. It's All To Lose
24. Invitation
25. A Singular Pleasure
26. To Lose The War
27. Names
28. Turbulence



If you've been with me this long, you've got my thanks.



D

Saturday, June 11, 2016

Restructuring the ARK Series: An Autumn Veil and A Steel Horizon

In accordance with my first formal rejection for the ARK books, which, FYI, makes me a real author, I'm taking seriously the advice to not pitch a work exceeding 125,000 words in length. (One veteran speculative fiction agent said bluntly in panel at the Chicago Writing Workshop back in May, "I've never sold a sci-fi/fantasy book longer than 140,000 words.")

FYI: I attended the crap out of that conference.

The So-So News: I didn't feel like I was finished with An Autumn Veil after the first act, which is why I kept writing and revising for six years. But if I wanna sell, I've gotta play ball.

Other So-So News: This means I have to break An Autumn Veil into two books, one 97k, words in length, the other 107k words in length. Book two will be called An Autumn Veil. Book one will now be called A Steel Horizon. Also, prologues are no longer "in vogue," and the same veteran agent who's never sold a book over 140k words recommended cutting them. Thus, my prologue has been relegated to an interlude.

The (Potentially) Good News: I can now approach prospective agents with a book that (1) will more likely sell due to its reduced length and (2) feature the sequel right off the bat. Which means that I could potentially receive a double advance and double royalties because I will have sold two books instead of one.

Also: Goddess from the Machine, the first major spin-off novel, is about halfway done. Presuming I sell these first two books, I'll have something new out the door within a year and a half. Three is the magic number when you're selling a series, since we binge our media in this culture - and not just Netflix, y'all.

And I've updated my website to reflect the changes to the ARK series.

Here are the revised chapter and part listing for the first two novels in the ARK series.

BOOK 1: A STEEL HORIZON

Part I: Ghosts of Chimon-Jing
1: The Autumn Garden
2: Midnight
3: Ghosts of Chimon-Jing
4: The Trainman
5: The Conclave
6: What Friends Are For
Part II: Lying Awake
Interlude: The Prose of Fotius, Record One
7: Helmsman's Folly
8: The Merchant Arcade
9: A Special Place in Hell
10: We Should Be Sleeping
11: If The Stars Are Willing
12: Broken Promises
13: The Only Life I've Ever Known
14: A Well To Draw From
15: What Tomorrow Holds
Part III: A Steel Horizon
Interlude: The Prose of Fotius, Record Two
16: A Lovely Day
17: Revelations
18: City On The Winds
19: Storm Clouds
20: Event Horizon
21: To Reap A Whirlwind
22: Falling
23: The Heavens Remained Silent
Epilogue: The Prose of Fotius, Record Three

BOOK 2: AN AUTUMN VEIL

Part I: The Demons We Serve
1: Awakenings
2: Prison Cell(s)
3: The Voice On The Other Side
4: Greasers
5: The Knowledge Of Good And Evil
6: A Letter From A Murderer
7: Into The Hinterlands
8: I Am Of The Gifted
9: Judsung Hollow
10: The Wrong Business
11: The Bridge Of Nof
12: A Good Death
Part II: A Convergence of Fates
Interlude: The New Guy
13: Four Things
14: Hell And All Its Demons
15: Where I'll Stand
16: Puzzle Pieces And Pawn Coins
17: One Of Us
18: The Talisman
19: Signed, An Anonymous Appreciator Of Fine Mechanics
20: Which Way To Go
21: Arcologies
Part III: An Autumn Veil
22: Staying Dead
23: Lost And Found
24: A Threshold Of Courage
25: A Root Of Evil
26: Truth
27: Starlight
28: The Dryad
29: The Nonagon Directive
30: Deja Vu
31: The Blood On Our Hands
32: The Trainman And The Magistra
33: I Won't Let You Fall

And since you've read this far, here are the five major parts (no chapters!) of Goddess from the Machine:

1: Some Measure of Peace
2: Constellations
3: A Star-Strewn Girl
4: The Fear of Our Scars
5: Goddess from the Machine

If you've been with me this long, you've got my thanks.



D

Monday, October 26, 2015

Princess Azula: Villanous Femme Fatale



Do you like Avatar: The Last Airbender? Do you like great villains? Do you like Princess Azula of the Fire Nation? You can read about why Azula is one of the best villains in any story in the 21st century thus far in my newest article on Geekdomhouse.com, available here.

Comment, share, and link!



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Friday, September 11, 2015

A Theology of Christian Geekdom



My article A Theology of Christian Geekdom has been acquired by Canadian Christian geek zine Geekdom House. You can check it out here.

I'm goin' north for the winter.





D

Thursday, September 10, 2015

Great Review of the Quantum Fall of Thaddeus Archibald DuBois

I'm happy to report that reviews for the Quantum Fall of Thaddeus Archibald DuBois are overwhelmingly positive. Here's one of my favorites from episode 1, Peter Pan Complexes for the 21st-Century Man:


I had the opportunity to read a draft of the story prior to publication, and just finished reading the finished product moments ago.

QUANTUM FALL is a first-person present narrative, with the author as its main protagonist, and it involves time travel. Normally, this combination of elements would cause me grave concern, and in fact it did despite Mr. Martin's reputation. I confess, I was terrified by this prospect of first-person-present-autobiographical-time-travel-fiction.

I am extremely pleased to report to you, potential readers, that my fears were not only unfounded, I found myself a tremendous fan of the book even before I was done reading the acknowledgements. (Sorry, I couldn't resist.)

Daniel Rodrigues-Martin is a capable and witty author--clearly well-read and versed in the art of crafting prose without becoming prosaic. His dialogue is amusing and crisp, his characters straddle the fence between the real and fantastic, and I hope he is willing to report to Mr. DuBois that this reviewer looks forward to reading more of their strange adventures through spacetime.

This is the first installment of what promises to be a fun-filled steampunk alt-history serial. It is a quick read, but worth every red cent on Kindle. I will be waiting in earnest for more, and recommend that you join me. It was a tossup between 4 and 5 stars, but I tend to be a little stingy with that last star on first-in-series books.

Buy The Quantum Fall of Thaddeus Archibald DuBois, Episode 1, on Amazon.

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